WHAT MAKES A POEM GOOD?
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1. FRESH IMAGES
A POEM SHOULD BE PALPABLE AND MUTE
AS A GLOBED FRUIT.
LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL.
2. VALUABLE INSIGHT
DEATH, THOU SHALT DIE.
YOUNG PEOPLE HAVE LOTS OF FUN.
2. MUSIC THAT DOES NOT DRAW ATTENTION TO ITSELF
SOMEONE AT A TABLE UNDER A BROWN METAL LAMP
IS STUDYING THE HISTORY OF POETRY.
JUST TO BE TENDER, JUST TO BE TRUE,
JUST TO BE GLAD THE WHOLE DAY THROUGH.
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WHAT MAKES A POEM BAD?
1. SENTIMENTALITY
HOW DEAR TO M Y HEART WAS THE OLD-FASHIONED HURLER
WHO LABORED ALL DAY ON THE OLD VILLAGE GREEN
HIS ART IS ECCENTRICITY, HIS AIM
HOW NOT TO HIT THE MARK HE SEEMS TO AIM AT.
2. RHETORICAL, OVER-BLOWN LANGUAGE
I LIKE TO SEE IT LAP THE MILES
AND LICK THE VALLEYS UP
BREATHES THE MAN, WITH SOUL SO DEAD,
WHO NEVER TO HIMSELF HATH SAID,
THIS IS MY OWN, MY NATIVE LAND!
3. DICACTIC PREACHING
SO KEEP YOUR MENTAL BALANCE
WHEN CONFRONTED BY A FOE,
BE IT ENEMY IN AMBUSH
OR SOME DANGER THAT YOU KNOW.
WHEN I HAVE FEARS THAT I MAY CEASE TO BE
BEFORE MY PEN HAS GLEANED MY TEAMING BRAIN.
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